I Need Proofreading Help On My Ad Pages

[Bobson]

I am a software developer that is about to release a new product, I have created a couple of ad pages for this product, But, Like alot of programmers I have very bad grammer and a bad eye when it comes to writing

so please check out some of these pages and let me know some of these grammer issues, spelling issues, layout issues whatever


PRODUCT DESCRIPTION PAGE
http://www.compdatadevelopers.com/payme.asp

Please Help

[Mike]

Can't you just pop it into an editor and check the spelling from there?

[incka]

Mike - Often typos and spelling mistakes are other words. I have often put 'your' instead of 'you're' and I've once put 'reply' instead of 'rely'. These mistakes are not picked up by text editors. The good people of murmurs proof-read debt management guide for me and found over twenty mistakes that Word 2002 did not pick up.

[incka]

On payme.asp : 'Print Reports on current and previous year sells' should be 'Print Reports on current and previous years sales' I think...

Edit: You spelt 'manuals' as 'manuels'.

Edit: I think 'givein' should be either 'give in' or 'given'.

[romm]

On payme.asp:"Written in a programming language for business (Visual Basic 6) it intergrates well ..." I think 'intergrates' should be 'integrates'.
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[incka]

Good way to advertise!