Please pick the Headlines that entice you to Buy

[exoticpublishing]

My new copywriter is starting w/ the headlines & wants me to pick the one I like the best.

I'd like to hear which 3 you like the best so I can gage people's reactions. :)

Can you pls. give me the corresponding #s starting from the one you like the best to the 3rd best.

Thanks


Michelle
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[KelliShaver]

10 (the only one I really care for at all), 11, and 7... Most of them sound entirely too unprofessional for me to get the feeling that I would get sound business advice from them.

[jacob]

i prefer number 10 myself. the rest i read and feel that im reading spam email subject lines in my inbox.

[Peter Hobday]

Exotic - I write headlines for a living and they usually derive from the opening paragraph, which is where your Unique Selling Proposition should be explained.

So I don't think your method of chosing a headline is the way to go! Asking an opinion isn't the same as actually selling or getting a response to your letter. What people like or don't like has no bearing on the response.

You have an interesting product and an interesting problem: how to avoid the natural objections to purchase and being dismissed as just another spam type promotion.

If I saw some more of the product, I could come up with an idea.

Peter

[Peter Hobday]

Exotic - please contact me via email if you wish - I forgot to say.

Peter

[ChrisS]

10 is the best.

I'd love that course! But would I have to pimp myself out for a while to start?